I think we did quite well in our prelimination task, we followed the 180 degree rule, the 60 degree rule, match on action etc. But there were some things we could have improved.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Pt6pTRulII
In the opening scene, the sound whilst the main character is walking up the stairs is very loud, the footsteps in particular, and they drown out the muttered 'afternoon' from Luke to myself. Although this was down to the camera's recording quality, we could have reduced the sound during editing. The sound also sounds a little disjointed between scenes, but this was because the sound was recorded via the camera, that needed to be moved between shots. In a real production, the sound would be recorded from a static device such as a microphone attatched to a boom
The main problem with the clip though, is the glaringly obvious continuity mistake. When Luke opens the door to Sam's office at approx 0'16'' he leaves it open, not closing it. But when Sam storms out of his office at 0'40'' the door is closed, so he has to open it. This means that someone must have mysteriously closed the door between Luke leaving it wide open and Sam storming out, which is not shown. This is a large break in continuity and ruins the flow of the clip. It only took one eagle-eyed viewer to notice it, then the rest of us could not miss it, spoiling the illusion that this was real life and making us all aware it was just a show.
Continuity breaks like this can spoil the illusion of a film or production, and we will be sure to be extra-vigilant in the production of our main task to be sure that nothing like that will happen again.
Overall though, I am pleased with how the exercise came out, the camerawork is steady, the acting has no mistakes, it is well edited with no gaps or mistakes, it is dramatic, gritty and professional. We also made good use of different camera shots, such as worm's eye view and shot reverse-shot.